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In the city of Birth, live Max and Marin, that made a blood pact to always have sucess on they journey, the pact was made in a ceremony, but they forgeted to clean the place where the ritual was made, and a door opened and Frieda and Branca scaped from the door, they made the ceremony works, but they are bad and formed a evil team - The Machines - All of then are witches and mages.
In the jorney you have to stop then, because they have a cliché (the wanna own the world) and made the Elite 4 get back to his place, the heroes have a friend that camed too from the door, Florence that are a good witch.
Florence give to the heroes special Pokémon, that can't be founded in wild, and give speed power to the boy and strenght to the girl (a cliché too is the boy have strenght and the girl speed).
i had thay idea when i was playing Florence + the Machine album - Ceremonials - and i like so much witches and rituals (no, i never will do one) hope you all like.
Last edited by RaltVus (2014-10-22 16:56:18)
Sooo, no one commented, i wanna see if you all liked or not,!!!
I think the storyline can turn out great but only if you put more time planning, why do the things happen in a way they do.
For Dark Energy, I always tried planning as much beforehand as possible so that I could link all kinds of happenings with each other so that there would be only a few cliches around - and even they wouldn't make a big difference to the player. After all, if what happens in the hack isn't natural, or beliavable, the player won't focus on story either.
Last edited by Miksy91 (2014-10-25 22:31:36)
Thnx for anwser, but i don't have a Full Project, i just haved a idea, i posted here to not forget, but i liked your idea, and expect to someone to use that idea in a hack, completing the story like they want.